The review of the market needs more detail. How the market started the week and how it was affected during the week and how it closes. If there were any big days in the week. Your post is too general.
This is a very vague post. You did not indicate what happened during the week, and if you were to indicate that then you could have also stated what may have caused an increase. (I.e. a big sale or purchase by a major corporation).
The review of the market needs more detail. How the market started the week and how it was affected during the week and how it closes. If there were any big days in the week. Your post is too general.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very vague post. You did not indicate what happened during the week, and if you were to indicate that then you could have also stated what may have caused an increase. (I.e. a big sale or purchase by a major corporation).
ReplyDeleteNot enough detail. It would have been more helpful if you would have included what actually happened during the week, such as increases or decreases.
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